Phoenixian Bath

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"Phoenixian Bath"   10 - 6 - 04



faith well-learned

and money well-earned

exchange hands, adieu



by moonlight's grip

there begins a trip

relaxation well-due



colors and sounds

heavens and grounds

invert and flip sides



nerves begin to tingle

as senses intermingle

nothing is able to hide



hearts break and mend

emotions shake and blend

as all sinks and floats



the oddity of this feeling

has sent your mind reeling

as thoughts become smoke



drained from an evening

a torrent of fire and feeling

basking in a shell of anew



you gather your thoughts

consider what you've bought

as you're blinded by morning dew...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

it's open to interpretation - enjoy

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