The Deed

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Love/Obsession

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i wish i wish

this wish tonight

to take my soul

on its final flight

for the deed i've done

for the wrongs committed

for the lies i've told

for the seeds i've sewn



having lead on

people around me

i've committed treason

to no other than me

stabbing myself

in the back

a victim of

my own attack



how could i

this innocent one

do these things

that I have done

a crippling blow

to the psyche

the mind

what have i done

with these lips of mine



forgive me not

for i have sinned

i have trespassed

u let me in

shoot to wound

not to die

let me live

let me cry



now left alone

my wounds do heal

but now only scars

shall appear

reminders of

the deed i've done

for the wrongs i've committed

an how you won....

Author's Notes/Comments: 

once again I give you Obsession... the bitch of my life and the itch in the middle of my back....

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Leah Pittman's picture

wow, another one that im not sure what to say about. you are quite a writer. you should be very proud of your work.
"a vitim of my own attack", i sure can relate to that.
another amazing poem. almost...haunting (in a good way).
see ya,
Leah