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Hopeless - - which seems better??
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Depression "Hopeless" 9 - 26 - 01
the dark
heart
the light
body
the small
mind
the dead
soul
this huge
hole
this lacking
life
full of
strife
expecting the
death
letting go
hope
cutting the
rope
burning my
bridges
ignoring my
friends
waiting, my
end....
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"Hopeless" 9 - 26 - 01
the dark
heart,
the body,
light
the small
mind,
the dead
soul,
this huge
hole
this life,
lacking
strife is
filling,
expecting the
death,
letting go,
hope
cutting the
rope
burning my
bridges,
ignoring my
friends
waiting, my
end....
I like the 2nd one better. It's easier to read with puncuation, well for me anyway. :x
I like the original version...to me it semed to flow a litte more.