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Despair in the air

Fright comes with the night

Another day in this miserable life

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my first attempt at Haiku, suk'd.  5-7-5 is the standard form(accepted one, ne way) but, hey, i liked it  :D  it's the thought, not the form, eh??

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 8:59pm
©8 July 2001 - 9:52pm — lillep
15 April 2002 - 6:40pm — Leah Pittman (not verified)
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hey, thanks for the comments on my poems.(im glad you found "insomnia" amusing, i think it is too:)
i really like this poem of yours. short and to the point. i know all about having a "miserable life" good write.
take care,
Leah