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For You, Whoever You Are (Dream Girl Blues)
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When I find you,
I will start to make sense
Your laughter will hit me like
a fatal hurricane
your presence will sting like
an empty bed
I will melt completely
to a puddle
I will invite you to dive in
and swim
as if you are
careless of drowning
You will have to
break me down into
pieces small enough to
fit in your pockets
just so your fingertips can always
feel me there
with you
and I will write you love letters
I will lick your name across my lips
I will follow your soul into the masses
until the lights go out
then I will color your eyes into stars
I will set flame to my own body
if it is what you want
I will be the miracle you did not
know you were praying for
I will set right the chaos of
your maddening heart
and find you
disarmed
because mine will touch you in
places my hands cannot
I have been sweating
for your love
I have been shaking in
the coldness of
let downs
shaking
from the violence of waiting for
what never comes
This one makes a lot of
This one makes a lot of sense. There are some emotions, especiall of desire and/or disappointment, that can only be expressed this way. To express them in some more prosaic, more "established" way is both to belittle and betray them.
J-Called
:)
God this si worth skipping homework for! <3
Much Love
Ashley
Love this!
"When I find you I will start to make sense"
Beautiful write!
*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james
Thank you :) glad it made
Thank you :) glad it made "sense" to anyone at all, kind of half assed that one.
"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.
Your work always echos
Your work always echos another writer on this site. :) perhaps that's why I find it soo good! Fantastic write!
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
It does? May I ask who? and
It does? May I ask who? and thank you!
"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.
awwww :)
she will be very lucky :)
Awww thank you so much! Damn
Awww thank you so much! Damn it she really will if I could just find her!
"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.