I Loathe You With All 206 Bones Of My Body

 

I cry every single day
That is ridiculous
It's like you died

except you didn't
You lived
you are living
and every commercial break I think
about slitting my wrists
the right way

 

but I don't
you aren't even worth the cost of
the razor

 

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a.griffiths57's picture

Very strong over whelming

Very strong over whelming poem, I hope things work out well for you and you continue to get better in life. Good write getting to the heart of the matter. Be impatient to experience what is around the corner, so as to speak, life has some interesting twist and turns.


 

 

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Incompl's picture

"I don't watch TV cuz it's just a box of lies"

This poem is smoldering, I love it. 


Let your teeth show

life_used_to_be_lifelike's picture

Thank you :)

Thank you :)


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.

allets's picture

I Watch A Lot of TV

I just don't believe most of it. Glad they are not worth a razor - you said it very well. Rant on! ~slc~

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01-18-17: just reread and yep, the impact is that bitch slap up the side of the head - tres RANT! - Lady A -

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