Falling

I'm falling, falling into darkness . . .

I try to reach your hand but I slip through.

I see your face . .but its disappearing.

Growing smaller and smaller.

A tear falls just like I am.

Its my fate.

For this life and the next.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This used to be Darkness.But as you see I changed it.

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Aaron's picture

very good poem i fully understand but one thing u should know is u can change your fate :) email me sometime ill help ya if u want lata