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I want to cry

I need to cry

But I just can't cry

Everything seems to be going wrong

I met a guy

I fell for him

Hard and fast

I thought we had something special

Then he ditched me

And I came back to earth

I came crashing down

Just as life seems to settle

Something changes

Just as I begin to feel like I fit in

My life is uprooted again

I wish I could just let go and cry

But I can't

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©6 July 2006 - 3:30am — laghorses
26 September 2007 - 7:27pm — Stephen Di Fede (not verified)
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I know how it feels not to be able to cry. Really all you need is the right shoulder to be there for you. (I don't care if that sounds corny.)

6 July 2006 - 7:43am — Free_Spirit
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And I came back to earth
I came crashing down

a Damaged crazy soul

11 August 2006 - 3:00am — tonitails
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someone i know is an ass... but this is a good poem... :)

1 May 2007 - 1:00am — Nathaniel Jordan (not verified)
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I can sympathize. I know how it is to feel emotionless when you should be shattered. You've captured that pretty well in your writing. Nice work!