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School End
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just me The end of the year,
Is almost here.
Final papers are due,
Before the summer begins anew.
Final exams are upon us,
So studying is a must.
Soon we will be free,
If we don't get a D.
Though the last days drag on,
We soon will be gone.
Free at last,
School is a thing of the past!
Cute. I like this one.
I noticed something though... Line 4, the "the" before "summer" seems to through off the reading. Then the last line switches verb tenses... Shouldn't you have the last line in future, too? Then you might be able to cut out the "a thing"...
But then, what do I know about poetry?
Keep writing! :)