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~Get A Life!~

(life, humorous poem)





Some of you may find my poetry sweet and cute,

But some of you might give me just the boot!

Some of you may leave me a nice feedback

But some of you may leave me just a piece of crack!



Some feedbacks are nice and some really suck!

Some of you people sound like a dying duck, quack, quack…

And in several houses I’ve seen monkeys wear socks

Some of you people make my heart sing and rock!



It is very pleasant when you leave me a nice feedback

But if you leave me a nasty one, you better watch out Jack!

Some of you may find my poetry nice and cute,

But some of you might give me just the boot!



I like writing my poetry night and day!

I am having lots of fun composing stories and pictures just for me!

I just love writing about everything under the moon and the sun!

Sometimes I just write and paint till the whole day has come and gone!



Sometimes I wish I could write like that great and famous poet nun,

But I am not a great poet and I am not a monk or even a flying nun,

And I don’t live in an abbey; and of saint I have none,

I wish I could write like Edgar Allan Poe, but then my poems wouldn’t be fun!



If you don’t like what you see here, eh, don’t read me,

You’re welcome to stay and read me or you can just go away

I am a happy poet and I like what I write so far you see

I just like writing about anything and everything under the sun



I like to plant into your brain nice ideas, like a good seed

I don’t like to see yours or mine overrun with all sorts of weed

Some of you may find my poetry sweet and cute,

But some of you might give me just the boot!





Some of you should get a life, I already got mine!

I just love to write my poetry 'cause for me is better than any wine!

Some of you may find my poetry sweet and cute,

But some of you might give me just the boot!







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Dorian Petersen Potter

aka ladydp2000

copyright@2007





April,29,2007

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 8:37pm
©1 May 2007 - 8:00pm — ladydp2000
2 May 2007 - 3:38am — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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I so totally agree with your piece. Some people leave stupid uncalled for comments which is not a real critique where others care enough to say what they liked or didn't like and why. Those are the ones I appreciate the most..