Running around in semi circles
Keeping your distance you're growing near
While the land across seems to disappear
Dragging with you the stars upon the sea.
Reflecting lights over the shadows
Angles and lines chasing the seas
Colorful kaleidoscopes with my eyes I see
Over the crystal waves now the moon appeared.
Ladydp2000
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WOWowowo..now i dun know which one is better , this or the Mist .. SMilesz.. WEll, guess both are wonderful in their own ways. THis is shorter, but i kinda like its choice of words better... Have a nice day, Dorian. :@)
another great peace,I close my eyes and can see. Well I think you know what I mean. I'm not bad at writing poems but very sad when I try to say how things make me feel. Sorry about that Brian
Definately a beautiful poem! This is very nice!!