I hate you.
The way you
laugh
and smile
and sing.
I hate you.
and how you
never
need
a thing.
I hate you.
The way you
stare
into
my soul.
I hate you.
And how you
always
know
my needs.
I hate you.
And the way
you
make
me feel.
And most of all,
I hate you.
Not
At
All.
this seemed choppy to me,
this seemed choppy to me, parts followed a rhyme scheme then parts did not, which for me throws off the flow, that being said I did enjoy the parts that followed the scheme
Much Love
Ashley