I hate you.

I hate you.
The way you
laugh
and smile
and sing.

I hate you.
and how you
never
need
a thing.

I hate you.
The way you
stare
into
my soul.

I hate you.
And how you
always
know
my needs.

I hate you.
And the way
you
make
me feel.

And most of all,
I hate you.
Not
At
All.

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running_with_rabbits's picture

this seemed choppy to me,

this seemed choppy to me, parts followed a rhyme scheme then parts did not, which for me throws off the flow, that being said I did enjoy the parts that followed the scheme


Much Love

Ashley