The Dark Neveah

Sinking deeper
Into the red clouds
A whisper brings you
To a place
Of dark pleasure
And sweet satisfaction.

Oh why,
Must I endure
This wondrous torture?
Trapped within my own web,
Of self loathing?
Speak to me,
And let me hear your voice
In order
To set myself
Free.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Enjoy, my friends.

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cdj410's picture

i too need to be set free

I really like this poem of yours in that it refers to a few things that i feel i can readily relate to: the whisper of someone you long for that brings great satisfaction and then the torture that their absence brings followed by self loathing. That self loathing is something I deal with everyday and would like nothing more then for someone to set me free of it. Anyways its nice to see that someone else shares similar feelings so that I don't feel so alone.