Here's a partial list of things
-some are old, some new
Of things that cause me to get sick
when I think of you:
Number one, each day you wake
(I think that says it all)
Number two, you decide to speak
(I can't believe the gall)
Number three, you curse and swear
-you leave junk lying everywhere.
Number 5, the attitude
(you really are not cool)
Number 6, the way you talk
(an uneducated fool)
Number 7, you "know it all"
Number 8, you're never wrong
Number 9, you snore at night
(and by the way your breath's a fright)
Number 10, you need control
(a bossy, power-hungry troll!)
Number eleven, you'll cheat to win
Number twelve, can lie with a grin
I'll sum up numbers thirteen through twenty
I could go on and on, but for now it's plenty:
You don't care who you hurt, you're a no-good con
You're weak and phoney -- good ridance, be gone!
You fake your way or ride someone's name
And never dream of taking the blame
But the sad part....
above all above
You didn't see
you had genuine love.
Your very well spoken and reveal that in your poems. Dont let your husband keep you down, you go out there and find somebody who will treat your better.
i love this poem it is good all the way down but the best part is "But the sad part.... above all above You didn't see you had genuine love." this is so good and i have been here before and gotten hurt and told them off so i know how almost the whole poem feels you are great and should keep it up much love ashley
Much Love
Ashley
I liked this poem :) Keep up the great work
I hope you got it all out of your system. Some good old-fashioned venting here. You made me mad at him and I don't even know him!
Wow, you must really hate your ex...Your poem really amused me. I havent read any of your other poems, but i really like this one. its great! keep up the good work. little munchkin
I hope u felt better after writing this....i wonder if poetry does the same to u as it did(and still do to me): heals my soul and calms my heart... Thanxs for sharing this, Stephanie...I wish u well and happy , always.... Can i recommend 2 poems for u, along this vein of thought? 1. Beyond This Shore 2. No Big Loss ~~Respectfully...