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shivers
The shivers down your back
And the shaking of my hands
The way you close your eyes
When the excitement hits
There has been a thought in my head
To crawl into your lap, to be your kitty cat
Because lately this loneliness has made me so sad
The way time becomes thin
When there are goosebumps on my skin
Drawn by a fragile touch of your hand
When you explore this forgotten land
There has been a thought in my head
To crawl into your lap, to be your kitty cat
To leave this lonely bed, to never come back
I like this
very much,
you write very well seeing that English is a second language?
Here is a favorite of mine, enjoy...
http://www.postpoems.org/authors/9inety/poem/951417
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Oh thank you :) I have a lot
Oh thank you :) I have a lot to learn because English is my second language. Sometimes I feel like my vocabulary is too small for expressing all the complicated feelings. And the poem you linked is beautiful. Thanks for your comment!
you will
succeed as far as you want to go.
writing is not hard
but it takes work
like anything else
but you have talent
so tell yourself that the sky is the limit
do not limit yourself
try to write about everthing you know
your people
your surroundings
and your own imagination
stay safe
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
i will
not limit myself
and i will tell myself
to go even beyond the sky.
But really, thanks!