Our minds play tricks
Begging for replies
Last words
And sighs.
The need
For want
Or not.
Wanting / Unheard
To hear what ?
We want
To say again
Our mind
Playing tricks
Begging for
Replies
Last words
And sighs.
We don't want to hear .
KS
.
When everything else fails
Drop back to here
And Punt.
KS
Love this.
I really enjoy this poem and the way it was written. Simple and elegant, yet such a strong meaning.
Small girl with a big heart. -Jo
Thanks so much Jo
It surprised me to see you
Said something.
It is a really good thing
What you aspire to do
In your Life.
My Heart Is With You.
KS
What I say...
is called speech.
Yoo Hoo
I called
And heard what ?
KS
Do you love ?
The,reply never came..... I‘m still waiting
©bishu
At times I do
But I have to have more information
Then what you have provided ?
KS
I like them, But I don't
I like them [comments],
But I don't live for them
But everybody is different and that's so cool.. :D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
In reality
SSmoothie
You were half way there
In my thought processes
When I wrote this poem.
This was a " stop and go poem "
With a conflicting nature.
KS
I like comments unless
They are annoying.
Like the poem says.
Plus the poem has a duality
To mean something
Completely different.
Just sayin'
SSmoothie
It is more then about the comments.
In reality the people that particapate is small
On this site.
The Looker--- The C'er--- The Believer.
Three Different Things.
For the Rest about this:
Reference.
" The Unkowns ".
But you are right.
Thankss
KS