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  Superhot

   I said

 

   But it was

 

   If i use all my good stuff

   I would of used it up

   That's why i don't

   But then i see

   Someone else

    Write something

    Like i did

    Mine is put away

    Somewhere

    For some rainy day

 

    Hell with this

    Hell with that

    I'm walkin

    Through it now

 

    (Let it fall)  huh

 

    Rainy days

    Funding fun

    Baby want's

    To see it

     Fall

 

    West Coast buddies (run)

    Had enough

    Jump up on that wall

 

    SuperHot

    I said

    She was

    Let it rain

    For her

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a.griffiths57's picture

Good write, why do you not

Good write, why do you not publish the best of your works, just because someone else is writing about same or similar topic? I do not think it is a lack of confidence in your self; so why not publish all that you write, it would be more inclusive - we are owed your best poetry. Good write kindred-spirit.


 

 

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KindredSpirit's picture

I like the fact that

You read and comment on

Peoples work

I am in a bind right now

But I might put out

Something i really like

I don' t know

I can straight rap up a storm

But it's gone then

Into the wind