I came to ask you out

Folder: 
Sadness

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Boy

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I was walking to your house at night

it seemed creepy without very much light

almost there before it all drownd

lights went out while stumbling to the ground



Im not sure what happened before it got cold

but i knew my shadow wasnt all that followed

I kept on getting chills crawl up my back,

and everytime turning there was nothing but black

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girl

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Arm lying near the door

holding out something

while collapsed on the floor

and with a small sound

i came out to see,

a person on the ground,

it couldnt be...



Life stained his clothes but

its what lay in his hand that made me cry,

a bloodstained white rose,was held out as he die


Author's Notes/Comments: 

My story poem thing.

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Jena White's picture

i LOVE IT!
really.
it's like...
invigorating...?
no...
suspensful...
yes...that's the word!
+jena

Laura Wiemar's picture

I love this poem. You did a very good job on it.