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10 AM Pabst
Uncle who? Uncle douche.
Your word is gospel... Okay GOD
I was disowned once, shame on her.
I won't let it happen again. No shame on me.
My head is not in the fog.
That wetness down my back isn't rain and I know it.
The wool hasn't been pulled over my eyes and I refuse to let it.
This is round 2.
I love who? I loved you.
Who you were, not who you are.
Oh, I'm dyslexic. You're a dog, NOT God.
you, your death threats and all.
when the abused and misused
are the subjects of dramatic poetry, and this is an excellent example of dramatic poetry in particularly a tragedy ,like this, can bring a tear to the more compassionate heart amongst us. I digress, A good poet will not submit to any limitations, The dramatic poet will underscore the pain with a biting expose' with a full view of the suffering displayed, expressing all the violence of passion, rendered by need. You my young poet, have done so with simplicity, that never supposes that suffering in silence is any longer a tolerable consideration.
Keep writing
It helps
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Thank you very much
Thank you very much