FALL HAIKU



Fall -

Cold

Not

Warm

Like

Summer

Or spring

or

even

for that matter

Winter

If you

Winter

In

A

Warm

Place

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This just came to me walking around

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Johnny Sachu's picture

I liked the simplicity, the statement of fact, you wrote here. I often do the same but, in mine, something of the nature of romance always seems to creep its way into the work. Good job.

tiger tommo's picture

G'day there

I'm currently having your summer and it's flipping nippy let me tell ya...where I'm from we do everything back to front - just wanted to say thanks for thinking of us out here in the antipodes where our winters are bloomin' hot...but I like this Kelvin guy he's got balls and stands up for the rights of honest and decent folk

good on ya mate