The Release

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As my soul seperates from the grip of my mind,
I look back at my body one final time,
I feel true freedom the higher I climb,
Worry declines as I leave my mortal self behind,
Something lets me know everything is fine,
to just sit back, relax and unwind,
this is music for me, my sight when im blind.

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palewingedpoetess's picture

Just Brilliant..............

The watcher watching the thinker in this piece. When we realize that our true selves ( the soul) is separate and different from the mask ( body) we wear to interact with this world it helps us a lot I believe. I am glad you are very aware of this too. It helps put so many things into perspective and unchains us from our ego driven thoughts. Really enjoyed this little ditty of yours Kalvin.......... Sincerely, your friend Melissa Lundeen.

poet610's picture

Something lets me know everything is fine,

Very nice piece, really enjoyed the flow.
deep yet relax at the same time.
keep up the great penning
610