All but a dream
I wish was the truth
or so it shall seem
a vice used to sooth
kiss me once again
so I can smack your pretty face
just let me know when
I won't be your disgrace
nothing you can say
can take back all the pain
the torment that you've caused
It was never a fucking game
Touch my face, just hold it
cuz it's the last time you will
empty promises, sold it
too cheap to foot the bill
I want to reach inside your brain and tweak it
make you open up your inner eyes and see me
know the words I need and speak it
instead you lace your boots and leave me
This is really great.
This is really great. Especially those last two stanzas.
Thank you :) they're my fav
Thank you :) they're my fav aswell lol
I like this. Nicely done.
I like this. Nicely done.
Thanks so much! :)
Thanks so much! :)
:)
"Touch my face, just hold it
cuz it's the last time you will
empty promises, sold it
too cheap to foot the bill
I want to reach inside your brain and tweak it
make you open up your inner eyes and see me
know the words I need and speak it
instead you lace your boots and leave me"
you took the words right from my mouth love!
sadly this is the only part of the poem I like, but I LOVE IT! so it evens out
Much Love
Ashley
You know my sitch, w my ex in
You know my sitch, w my ex in the army. It has to do with the conditioning he received and how in the end he chose the army. :)
:( HUGS
:( HUGS
Much Love
Ashley