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my daughter
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missunderstood look at you all grown
yet you still dont pick up your phone
your asleep now in your bed
I watch you even if you want me dead
your mom hates me and says bad shit about me
hell if she was me, she would forgive me cuz what i did see
I try to open the window but it is locked
its another way in your life, I'm blocked
you are my world and what keeps it turning
but every day it seems im not learning
your restraining order keeps you and i apart
its like telling a artist to not make art
I love you Ramona I always will
you are my daughter you always fit the bill
now have to leave for my cardboard box
I see moving your beautiful blond locks
Great creativity! I love to
Great creativity! I love to see poets step outside themselves and write from another point of view. Thanks for the author's note. Otherwise, I would have believed it to be autobiographical. Very convincing and sincere!
lol it was good. I know from
lol it was good. I know from my point of view id hate it too, if i had a daughter, if she did this to me.
But then again, if you dont want something like that to happen, then keep your eyes peeled, for things that lead to it. Cause i know, sometimes, a restrainting order, is the only thing to keep, people you dont want around away. Sometimes for good reasons though, some cause they are stupied. But there is always a reason.
-Elfy*
thanks for the r and r, read and responce
the daughter wasn't the bad person, the mom is who is the ex-wife, wanting to keep her "safe" from "me". my inspiration was from eminem, he is a sad soul but has great messages