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'02 Moving On-1st phase-
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2002 I have been to some places.
Pondered around...
Tired of seeing those faces...
tricking my mind.
Still, she's nowhere to be found.
Just when I think it's her,
the inevitable.
Again, my heart is scarred.
So humbled I become, I...
It, It tears me apart.
In this world that I dwell,
Only time will tell.
The absorption of this experience,
was a betterment for my inexperience.
©David Joel Rodriguez
I wanted to read your first poem after reading your latest......
is lovely to bear witness to a poet's evolution. It's hard to get to everyone on here though I do try. I mostly catch people when they log on and I click on the id and read away. Many a time I get giddily surprised and you sir did surprise. You are eloquent and encouraging as well as humble in how you write. I have only read a handful of your poems so far but I will read further. I hope you share more of your heart's delightful page children here as I am certain I am not the first to admire your gift. It was truly a pleasure to read your verse. Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen..................
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Thank You so much Melissa. I wonder why I didnt receive a notification on your comment :-( Wow almost 3yrs. It has been hard. Some things mended and some did not. May have been for a reason, but whatever it was, I'm satisfied with the outcome. I have been wondering of the same thing too by the way... My progress from the first to my current. Very interesting... I know, yet I wonder... ;-) Sometimes I am not sure why I can't write like I used too, but then again, maybe I am writing what I am meant too.
Thanks again Melissa!
David
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"You think Einstein walked around thinking everyone was a bunch of dumb-shits?"