01-09 Impatient Slowing

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DailyPoetryProject

The clock dismays at ticking out existence all the same.

Day to day it must remain unchanged in meter and refrain.

The timepiece growing ancient, as its pace has been replaced

by slowing days that amble vacantly while memories erase.



A low and shaking rumble making items fall from quaking

dusty shelves once taking pride in what they held, their grip forsaking

souvenirs and knick knacks, books of lore, pictures all fall to the floor

thrown assunder from the force of the clock’s hourly roar.



An hour takes two months to pass, a second takes a day

and as each tick creeps by in such a way so many chimes are saved

that by the time they get released so much inertia has increased,

they all come out at once and shake the house until the sound has ceased.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Yikes. . . first I couldn't even find inspiration for a theme or subject until I dwelled on how tired I am - a lazy tiredness that pulls creativity and initiative into a black hole that leads to places unknown (and that might be tomorrow's poem). This poem, like yesterday's, took a lot of working out and intensive thought to construct, probably because I chose to follow a rhyme pattern and enforce it as opposed to my usual brand of poetry which has little to no firm structuring. . . This poem could have been called "Clocks Grow Old," but that's already the name of a song by I Am Spoonbender.

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