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Hi Anuj



Read

both your poems

on love and longing.

In them, I

found sweet lamenting.

Though in blues

you write of death still it is not

the sound of darkness but

rightly categorised 'memory'

sweet memory

of love and yearning.

Keep writing

your feelings as

they come in words

to share with us

in sorrow and

happiness.


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