I've spent my life
searching for a paradise
a place i wasn't sure if it existed
no idea wether if it was tangible or spirited
a place never visited
perhaps, only for the gifted
but sometimes, we are just
too blind to see
what we are looking for
is right infront of us
and all u gotta do
is close your eyes
and feel your way thru the dark
with the fingers of your heart.
I've found my paradise
Sorry, it took me a while
to come to realize
that u take me there, everytime
I look into your eyes.
very good..i can really visualize what you are saying in this..i havnt really found my paradise yet...but im looking...great work:)