LIFE CAN BE A PUZZLE !

Life can be a puzzle, the pieces don't always fit.

 

But when they do it's amazing, it makes for a 

 

fantastic trip.

 

There are so many places, to visit one by one.

 

It can be an adventure, that you will not soon

 

forget.

 

The ocean with it's beauty, waves come crashing

 

ashore. These wind cans bring the saltiness that you 

 

can surely taste. Little drops of water spatters on

 

your face.

 

The mountain scents with forest trees, you 

 

hear the  rustling of it's leave. The sound of 

 

birds chirping, and animal scurrying far and near. 

 

Breathtaking is the snow filled slopes, white as 

 

white can be. warm chocolate be the fireplace, 

 

is where you want to be.

 

Then there are the Islands, a summer paradise.

 

The native dance and feast will fill you heart and

 

soul. 

 

The people are so friendly regardless where you go.

 

 

Just take advantage of your world.God made it for us

 

 all.

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Anretsuhn's picture

You could've split it into

You could've split it into lines
Or fixed the grammar a bit
But other than that, the poem is fine
One I can't soon forget!


 

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JeanneTX's picture

Life can be a puzzle !

Thank you for pointing out my mistakes, That is how we learn..  :)