Life can be a puzzle, the pieces don't always fit.
But when they do it's amazing, it makes for a
fantastic trip.
There are so many places, to visit one by one.
It can be an adventure, that you will not soon
forget.
The ocean with it's beauty, waves come crashing
ashore. These wind cans bring the saltiness that you
can surely taste. Little drops of water spatters on
your face.
The mountain scents with forest trees, you
hear the rustling of it's leave. The sound of
birds chirping, and animal scurrying far and near.
Breathtaking is the snow filled slopes, white as
white can be. warm chocolate be the fireplace,
is where you want to be.
Then there are the Islands, a summer paradise.
The native dance and feast will fill you heart and
soul.
The people are so friendly regardless where you go.
Just take advantage of your world.God made it for us
all.
You could've split it into
You could've split it into lines
Or fixed the grammar a bit
But other than that, the poem is fine
One I can't soon forget!
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Life can be a puzzle !
Thank you for pointing out my mistakes, That is how we learn.. :)