"You are," I said to you while running my fingers through your hair.
"The most beautiful, the most wonderful, the most incredibly fair."
"You are like that Helen of Troy" As I gently kissed your lips.
"Whose beauty stole a thousand hearts, and launched a thousand ships."
"You are" I said as I pulled you close, your body pressed to mine.
"Like the sweetest of the sweetest grapes that make the sweetest wine."
"You are" I said to you, as I slowly caressed your skin.
"The one who sets my soul on fire and burns me from within."
"You are" I said softly to you as I kissed above your eyes.
"The one who gives me wings of love that shoot me through heaven's skies."
"You are" I whispered softly, my head laid on your chest.
"The one who makes my heart subside and lays me down to rest."
"You are my sun"
"You are my moon."
"You are without compare."
I said to you, while lying still, my fingers in your hair.
Absolutly brilliant! This poem describable beyond words. The love and passion is fantastic and the picture you recieve in your mind when reading is unreal. Darron, my God... I am lost for words. You are a truly gifted!
Shaz
Beautiful and Inspiring. Thank you.
You better stop. This is too much. I just love all this love. That was so lovely. Oh the beauty of love fills the page. Great poem.
Your wife is a lucky woman. to be told such things is every womans dream. this poem is so beautiful, i almost cried when i read it. please post more.
beautiful... i like the way you blend your dialogue in your piece. you blend the actions and words together very well, and i can develope a visual image of two people. you're very lucky to be able to find someone who can inspire you like this... =)! until the next piece brings us together...