When you've been stripped
Of all your hope and pride
When nobody is left
To stand by your side
You have no faith or love
Days are void of joy
Someone's playing with your life
Like it's some kind of toy
Without your strength
You wish to cry
If you think you're empty
Then you believe a lie
The fight is gone
All that's left is hate
Rage is growing stronger
At an undefinable rate
Concious thought is lost
And anger takes control
The emptiness is filled
But you have lost your soul
It is a very real thing to lose your soul in rage. To lose feeling and thought, and ultimatly to feel nothing but rage. I like this poem, and the fact that you see it this clearly is way beyond the normal thought process's of a woman your age. Excellent.