Broken

There is no joy in life

no light in my soul.

I found that I am broken

that I am no longer whole.

Shattered into a million peices

so sharp I cut my fingers

and watch the blood flow freely

as I bleed myself dry.

I can no longer form anymore tears.

I can no longer cry

The candle that brought life to my life

has burned me to the core

Ifound that I am broken

that I am no longer whole.


Author's Notes/Comments: 

on the spot poem, lots of errors.

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Colin "Satyr" McNamara's picture

eh not as many errors as you would... I like this... captures pain well... pieces come apart but can also be put back together if you take the time to balance life out (also helps if someone who actually appreciates one for who they are comes along and helps too hehe).

I feel for you in this... but trust me when things can be put back together if you look to the right things... such as music (metal preferred) to alleviate the pain (razors and knives not included :P ). Horns up and grin... you'll be fine.