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Hey, Jane
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Lovespeak Hey, Jane, you taught we never need a cross
To get to heaven or to go across
We sing Taylor's old country tunes
Yet you also like '22'
Oh, Jane, I like the fact that you don't judge
Even though I've gone way too far and much
But what I like about you the most is
How you make a smile with your tender lips
I remember that post-test walk
A lot of things went to our talk
About that boy's common game
Know that his name rhymes with shame
I like the fact that you like green
You tell the things that you will feel
I hope you won't love that cheat
'Cause when girls cry, he does feast
...even though I've gone way
...even though I've gone way too far and much...wow - the imagery is fine in this phrase. To say it originally, differently, creatively is the poet's quest. I like that you are writing so much and far ~~A~~
Thank you for reading this
Thank you for reading this poem :)