tonight
the air is thick
with the scent of fire,
trying to suffocate my lungs
and saturate the mind
so i tried to breathe
i inhaled deeply,
with the sensual scents
i closed my eyes
and let myself just feel
this heartbeat is arrythmic
its beating fast, faster
erratically crying
for more
it was my own
but i felt
a similar echo
yours
and i was breathless
as you made me feel
this heat
mindless ...
helpless ...
breathless
with this need.
I really really like this one. It's short yet vivid...I really like the way you write. Can't wait to read the rest of them. :)