Breathless

tonight



the air is thick

with the scent of fire,

trying to suffocate my lungs

and saturate the mind



so i tried to breathe



i inhaled deeply,

with the sensual scents

i closed my eyes

and let myself just feel



this heartbeat is arrythmic



its beating fast, faster

erratically crying

for more



it was my own

but i felt

a similar echo



yours



and i was breathless

as you made me feel

this heat



mindless ...



helpless ...



breathless

with this need.

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Kristi Myer's picture

I really really like this one. It's short yet vivid...I really like the way you write. Can't wait to read the rest of them. :)