"Cant Let Go"

I dont know why

I hesitate

But its hard for me

To get things straight



Im trying my best

To just begin

To open my heart

Once again



And let you in

Inside my heart

So much to say

Where do I start?



How do I say

That "I love you"

Without kicking myself

The way I do



Cause Im scared you

Dont love me back

We're standing in the dark

And its pitch black



My eyes are open

But I cant see

Your standing here

In front of me



Im reaching for you

But cant feel your touch

Its sad cause I know

I love you so much



I love you so much

I hope you know

That no matter what

I just cant let go

  Cant let go...

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Chelsea N.'s picture

This was very beautiful!!! The rhyming made it flow very nice, and having the same number of lines for each stanza helped as well lol.
awesome, I lvoed it, very..emotional!
~Chels~

Adam Herdman's picture

Awww. That's pretty sweet for the one you love. He should be pretty proud! Nicely done. PD17 Out...