Impression

By my first impression,
I can tell your precious.
Your beaauty's reflectin.
In every single direction.
Alot of relationships accpeted.
Not too many rejected.
And Im detectin,
At times you was neglected.
Knowing your past,
I can tell this wasnt expected.
It hit you deep.
You was effected.
And your affections,
Led you to cursing him out.
Through ummmmmm,
An instant message.
And instantly you had regret it.
You missed his presence.
And probably his methods.
To make you breathless.
Like how for a present,
He gave you a in bed breakfast.
And you didn't wanna give it up.

By my second impression,
I can tell your precious.
More Independant by the second.
You decided you cant forgive him,
For all the girls he messed with.
You packed your bags and left him.
...And you never second guessed it.
You picked up the pieces of your heart,
From the different sections,
And made the choice to redirect it.
And you went out on a date to test it.
You met a guy name Kevin,
And his name is where your chest is.
The buyer of that ring filled with carats.
...And you love him,
He's the one that you rest with.
And now that you found the one,
And not worry about who your next is.
You decided that with this love,
Your gonna live up.

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Awesome such great rhythm and

Awesome such great rhythm and rhyme and the story well it was very... real and intimate which makes me feel like a fly on the wall but hey, someone's got to do it? an interesting read to say the least! cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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