I've stood in the darkness
Against the light
Evil surrounding
Corrupting the night
But then she came
Into my life
Healing me clean
Of all my strife
She showed me the way
Brought me to back to the light
Soaring so high
My Angel who's so right
I thank you so much
For you made me see
Just how special
I can trully be
I'll never give up
No, not on you
You showed me just how much
I can trully do
I know forever
We'll always be
I love you so much
My love, my Lacie
its really a gooood poem...love to read it and i went through your other poems and inspired alot...and will be doing comments on other tooo...hope you go through my poems to be a good poetess friend ...
James,
This new poem is great you should really keep at it.
All of your poems show so much feeling. I love them all.
But this one shows so much feeling. Keep at it! ur really great!! This one I think is the best. But knowing u u'll put another one that I think is much better. Ur wonderful keep at it!!!!!:)