My Angel

I've stood in the darkness

Against the light

Evil surrounding

Corrupting the night

But then she came

Into my life

Healing me clean

Of all my strife

She showed me the way

Brought me to back to the light

Soaring so high

My Angel who's so right

I thank you so much

For you made me see

Just how special

I can trully be

I'll never give up

No, not on you

You showed me just how much

I can trully do

I know forever

We'll always be

I love you so much

My love, my Lacie

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Afzal Shauq's picture

its really a gooood poem...love to read it and i went through your other poems and inspired alot...and will be doing comments on other tooo...hope you go through my poems to be a good poetess friend ...

Lauren Wilson's picture

James,
This new poem is great you should really keep at it.
All of your poems show so much feeling. I love them all.
But this one shows so much feeling. Keep at it! ur really great!! This one I think is the best. But knowing u u'll put another one that I think is much better. Ur wonderful keep at it!!!!!:)