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Friend to Last

I'm not one to be alone

But I'm out here all alone

I can't forgive our broken past

So I need a friend to last

 

All the fights that we've had

All the times I've made you mad

The shit I take from you everyday

Like what you do and what you say

How can I survive

How can I thrive

I've kept it in too long

So I've let it all out in this song

 

I'm not one to be alone

But I'm out here on my own

I can't forgive our broken past

So I need a Friend to last

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is a short song that was written for me by an artistic friend. It's about the relationship with my mother. 

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©23 July 2013 - 7:01pm — iwonderwho
21 November 2013 - 1:13am — nightlight1220
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I bet it is or will be a very

I bet it is or will be a very beautiful song. 

 

Relationships are built and take time. Good luck to you (or your friend...whatever)

.....

...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

22 November 2013 - 3:40am — iwonderwho
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i think so toogood luck to

i think so too :)

good luck to me, (thanks). he wrote it, but it's about me 

18 November 2013 - 10:52am — a.griffiths57
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    Clearly you are very

 

 

Clearly you are very disgruntled with you and your mothers relationship, the cry of loneliness is very clear in this song. I hope you and your mother can build some bridges and bond a little better. Your poem/song made for good reading.

 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57

20 November 2013 - 9:27pm — iwonderwho
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thanks (a friend wrote it, i

thanks (a friend wrote it, i did not)

and yes, i hope as time goes on our relationship will be more than just hanging by a thread.