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Silent Shoes
Of all my captivations
yours has held far longer,
and most mesmerising.
If I could do more than simply sigh
and let the ambience flow through these words,
surely a grander conduit is called for
than this simple pen?
Alas, captivations caught in penmanship
have no essence in permeating Ideas
or moving emotions when kept
in a shoebox
in the dark
under the bed.
I like the message behind the
I like the message behind the poem, however for me I am often thrown off when lines are broken up in what seems mid-way, I know this is a huge tendncey for poety, it just really throws me off
Much Love
Ashley
wow, id love to get my hands
wow, id love to get my hands on that shoebox!!! must b a treasure trove of great works!! thanks i enjoyed it muchly.
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
Indeed you may have more
Indeed you may have more Beavis, perhaps you could assist? This piece has plauged me for a while the last section of the last verse is lacking... I can not seem to find a satisfactory end.
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Nor for this one, poetry as shoes and under the bed! Truly finished. A grand slam finale Short and funky. I want more than 3 poems posted. I'm strange that way. Pleeeeeeeease! ~~A~~
A lady should never be kept
A lady should never be kept waiting!
small notion: Poem is perfect
small notion: Poem is perfect as it is. But, changing "moving emotions" to "wearing (unspoken) emotions" picks up theme of shoes. Just a thought. ~~A~~