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Magical journey
Sitting upon heavenly clouds,
Distracted by a million things.
Eyes darting across the room,
Marvelling what this night brings.
Any tensions that once were,
Will start to disappear.
It's time to let go of any dark thoughts,
Time to let go of any form of fear!
Pure bliss wandering up your body,
Formed as a tingly sensation.
Overwhelmed with happiness,
Taking form in a soft vibration.
Rules of perspective,
Don't stand a chance,
When your gazed upon distortions
Everytime you glance.
Contemplating the universe,
Even existence itself
Imagining life as a fairy tale,
Imagining life as an elf.
Fantasies can come alive,
Nightmares can too,
Wherever you let your mind wonder,
Is where you'll travel through.
The end of the voyage is near
Brains are somewhat scattered,
Forgotten all those discovered facts,
That felt like were all that mattered!
Next time this journey is taken,
Bring some things along,
A notebook and a pen,
A threefa and a bong!
I love the wording! And the
I love the wording! And the bong, another good factor to have at times lol I agree with you on this, big time.
This is quite beautiful and
This is quite beautiful and whimsical :)
~Soul
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your feedback!! Im glad you liked it:):)
So graceful..
I absolutely love this.. The flow, the subject matter, the humor, word choice. All of this is great.
Thankyou so much, i really
Thankyou so much, i really didn't expect people to love this so much:):) But i really appreciate the positive feedback!!
You've really captured your
You've really captured your timing in this piece. It flows exceptionally well. Your word choices also seem to be more thought out. Very nice.
Yay!! Improving all ready,
Yay!! Improving all ready, that's what I like to hear;) Thabkyouso much for reading my work an taking the time to leave me feedback I'll carry through the same!!:):(
I look forward to your next
I look forward to your next work.