You’re wasting my time
But I’ll let you for now
You can be with me,
Till I end it somehow
You’re using my time
But I’ll still let you be
I will leave you one day
You one day will see
I’m getting closer
To our soon end
You’ve wasted my time
We can’t get through this bend
I’ll say this once more,
I won’t take what you do
I have only one life,
And it’s not to spend with you
(Much later)
You’ve wasting my time,
And you wasting my breath,
Took too many days
Now I’m too close to death
You juggled my hours,
Till there were none to remain
And you cheated on me,
Just like love was a game…
It's not important whether or not poetry is honest, it's the emotions or imagery you caonvey through your words that matters. Besides...being cheated on sucks:) This is a good poem. Live for yourself and your love of someone else first...you shouldn't have to sacrifice because of their feelings (or changes in feelings).