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i don't know how to call this one, may be u have any idea
Life of a human, what is it
Why we have to struggle in it
Why do we face all that scratches and thorns
Just like water, who's way is blocked with the stones
Why life is a war where we have to fight
Why do we have to die for sunlight
Why there's more evil in life that I’ve seen
Why must I ask these questions at the age of nineteen
hey man thanx for reveiwing, i like this one, it kinda reminds me of one i wrote myself but yours is more precise, to the point, i'm no good with titles so i wont embarass myself by trying to come up with some. I like your work man, keep at it
Great poem - good questions.
How about a shorter more poigant title
like "WHY.." or "21st Century Riddle"
or "Life 2000"? In any event i enjoyed
this poem.
Keep writing - keep the faith.