Not Titled (chances)

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Stuff that sucks.

Verse 1 (type I)

If I were stronger maybe

I could talk a little better

And maybe I would

Feel a little better in

Exploring experience

And times of good feelings

Education from war

A war between hearts

One warm and caring

A war between hearts

The other is cold

Reintroduction to this

Cold winter wind has me

WOndering why I

Lend out my heat

To thaw out cold hearts

For chills give me a

Reference to pain

In everyday life

Because, sadly

Responsibility is not familiar

To this abominable snowbeast



Chorus

Election of protection

In a sect of insurrection

And transmissions of submisson

For atricious premonitions

Are soaring through the pouring

Thoughts of mourning you're ignoring

The shell I hide in was divided

By the pride that you provided



Verse 2 (I)

Failures of astonishing

Magnitude have oft

Befallen my heart

But my mind has chosen

To succeed and it will

Thanks sincerely for my

Education in war

A war on two fronts

Fighting for affection

A war on two fronts

Fighting for preservation

Reintroduction to this

Affection which, unbridled

Gives me stength to be

And be better than my

Weak heart could ever take

Taking me somewhere

To a better existence

I work to save myself

Im done with you

Love's unfamiliar to this

Abominable war monger



Chorus

Election of protection

In a sect of insurrection

And transmissions of submisson

For atricious premonitions

Are soaring through the pouring

Thoughts of mourning you're ignoring

The shell I hide in was divided

By the pride that you provided



Verse 3 (I)

Strength, being relative

Has me reeling because

I didnt know the extent

Of the powers you hold

But you've exercised them

And now I know my place

Education from war

A war of attrition

Gnawing on my humanity

A war of attrition

Tearing down my esteem

Esteem which held

You in the highest

It falling down and

You pulling out

Cominbed to make a faux

Depression of sorts

But your stock never dropped

Power so great

You hold on to my heart

Unfamiliar with mercy

You are an abomination



Bridge

An angel in my mind

You were a demon in my life

And you took each chance

Knowing you'd have another

But I'm done giving chances

Now I will take them



Verse 4 (type II)

Lateral movements of my mind

I' m now on a plane of indifference

Moving through life on a line

A horizontal existence

At this point it looks none too bad

Compared to perpetual sorrow

All the things I've needed and not had

Leave my lateral mind to harrow

Turning over leafs to try to

Begin a new experience

Gives the gods of grief their dues

They chuckle at my insolence





Chorus (type II)

You didnt care

When I cared

Now you care

That I dont

It makes me sick

(makes me sick)

And I wont

Choose to share

How I've fared

I don't care anymore



Verse 5 (type II)

I sit at the top, I'm smiling

Battles fought with casualties

The war was won without defiling

The consciousness of you or me

You tried your best and i defended

All that I hold near and dear

You sought to win when i rescinded

Finding fault in erroneous fear

Your victory anulled by greed

Wanting more than you deserved

Fulfilling wants ignoring needs

Your mind, a line, became a curve



Chorus (type II)

You didnt care

When I cared

Now you care

That I dont

It makes me sick

(makes me sick)

And I wont

Choose to share

How I've fared

I don't care anymore



Bridge/Outro

An angel in my mind

You were a demon in my life

And you took each chance

Knowing you'd have another

But I'm done giving chances

Now I will take them


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Like so many of my songs... No title...

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scott globetti's picture

i think this is awesome man. i wanna know if u would mind me using this song and putting guitar music to it if u havent already and playing it in my band. i think that it really has potential to be a great song. but really man...if u havent already wrote music for it...then email me man if u dont mind. ill give u full credit for writing it and everything, it had just really inspired me man. email me...scott84206@aol.com

Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

Verse 5 (type II) was absolutely amazing,so was the whole thing and to think this is in the "sucks" folder, maybe on the planet you come from, here that is pretty damn good.
Great job and keep writing
nikki


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