Verse 1 (type I)
If I were stronger maybe
I could talk a little better
And maybe I would
Feel a little better in
Exploring experience
And times of good feelings
Education from war
A war between hearts
One warm and caring
A war between hearts
The other is cold
Reintroduction to this
Cold winter wind has me
WOndering why I
Lend out my heat
To thaw out cold hearts
For chills give me a
Reference to pain
In everyday life
Because, sadly
Responsibility is not familiar
To this abominable snowbeast
Chorus
Election of protection
In a sect of insurrection
And transmissions of submisson
For atricious premonitions
Are soaring through the pouring
Thoughts of mourning you're ignoring
The shell I hide in was divided
By the pride that you provided
Verse 2 (I)
Failures of astonishing
Magnitude have oft
Befallen my heart
But my mind has chosen
To succeed and it will
Thanks sincerely for my
Education in war
A war on two fronts
Fighting for affection
A war on two fronts
Fighting for preservation
Reintroduction to this
Affection which, unbridled
Gives me stength to be
And be better than my
Weak heart could ever take
Taking me somewhere
To a better existence
I work to save myself
Im done with you
Love's unfamiliar to this
Abominable war monger
Chorus
Election of protection
In a sect of insurrection
And transmissions of submisson
For atricious premonitions
Are soaring through the pouring
Thoughts of mourning you're ignoring
The shell I hide in was divided
By the pride that you provided
Verse 3 (I)
Strength, being relative
Has me reeling because
I didnt know the extent
Of the powers you hold
But you've exercised them
And now I know my place
Education from war
A war of attrition
Gnawing on my humanity
A war of attrition
Tearing down my esteem
Esteem which held
You in the highest
It falling down and
You pulling out
Cominbed to make a faux
Depression of sorts
But your stock never dropped
Power so great
You hold on to my heart
Unfamiliar with mercy
You are an abomination
Bridge
An angel in my mind
You were a demon in my life
And you took each chance
Knowing you'd have another
But I'm done giving chances
Now I will take them
Verse 4 (type II)
Lateral movements of my mind
I' m now on a plane of indifference
Moving through life on a line
A horizontal existence
At this point it looks none too bad
Compared to perpetual sorrow
All the things I've needed and not had
Leave my lateral mind to harrow
Turning over leafs to try to
Begin a new experience
Gives the gods of grief their dues
They chuckle at my insolence
Chorus (type II)
You didnt care
When I cared
Now you care
That I dont
It makes me sick
(makes me sick)
And I wont
Choose to share
How I've fared
I don't care anymore
Verse 5 (type II)
I sit at the top, I'm smiling
Battles fought with casualties
The war was won without defiling
The consciousness of you or me
You tried your best and i defended
All that I hold near and dear
You sought to win when i rescinded
Finding fault in erroneous fear
Your victory anulled by greed
Wanting more than you deserved
Fulfilling wants ignoring needs
Your mind, a line, became a curve
Chorus (type II)
You didnt care
When I cared
Now you care
That I dont
It makes me sick
(makes me sick)
And I wont
Choose to share
How I've fared
I don't care anymore
Bridge/Outro
An angel in my mind
You were a demon in my life
And you took each chance
Knowing you'd have another
But I'm done giving chances
Now I will take them
i think this is awesome man. i wanna know if u would mind me using this song and putting guitar music to it if u havent already and playing it in my band. i think that it really has potential to be a great song. but really man...if u havent already wrote music for it...then email me man if u dont mind. ill give u full credit for writing it and everything, it had just really inspired me man. email me...scott84206@aol.com
Verse 5 (type II) was absolutely amazing,so was the whole thing and to think this is in the "sucks" folder, maybe on the planet you come from, here that is pretty damn good.
Great job and keep writing
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss