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Only god holds my fate(unfinished)
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Disorganized thinking Only God holds my fate
Though I tried to let her know
She just can't relate
So I had to let her go
Tried to change who I am
To what she wanted me to be
I am a simple man
But my strength she shall see
I gave her all I could
A large part of me included
She claimed the same is what she would
But my heart she just deluded
i like this one, it's well written and God is the only one who holds your fate, if you belive in him at least. this has deep meaning i can tell adn i love poems like that. keep it up.