Shaken
You have shaken me;
Determined not.
I have been shaken.
Like an earthquake inside me,
I have been disturbed.
I have disturbed.
You have shaken my world
With angry dellirium.
I have been shaken,
With rage and vulgur thoughts;
Thoughts I cannot control.
You had my whole body, mind, and spirit.
You had me wanting you so badly;
So badly, that I was shaken.
You somehow had become my World.
You were my happiness, my laugh.
You were my angry rage.
You were a dillusion.
A dillusion of Truth, I'd hoped.
A shaken dillusion of my world.
Too Much?
Shaken, I was; by you.
Shaken, for you would never have me.
My world has crumbled.
you have shaken me
Purposley, not
Mistakingly, yes.
I let you in, and I have been shaken.
Like peering at my reflection through shattered glass.
Shattered glass that wounds my heart.
Cutting, and scraping my insides with shattered glass.
I have been wounded.
Shaken, I am, That is me, Shaken.
By You.
Fantastic poem, excellent description, I especially like the part about the shattered glass.
omg i love this one
it's simply powerful.
i totally can relate to it. >:D<
beautiful
do i sense a lil bit of anger in this work of art, but its still a great poem no amtter what ppl may say about it :)
sweetheart thats deeper in a minute of reading then most people can desribe in their entire life. the inspiration of this one should really read this and sit there wondering what they have done
for this one not really much to say i understand it to well. but ya know im always here anytime
Again, very nice job defining emotions... I almost got lost in it :D ~Kudos~