Locution
Echoes... Yes
Fathomed tests
Undermined
Over mind matters
Ship of fools
Held tools
Survival ruled
Poor timing
Ghosts wrote
On peeled
Orange pages
Drenched
In salted water
Black ink drooled
A thief heard
Diluted
Muted tones
Compute
Archetypes
Larger than
Pied eye
Visions
Sandcastles in the air have
Sandcastles in the air have no foundations black ink drools bleeding on orange peeled paper sunken ship of fool’s drowned by their own tears and illusions of grandeur. I like the unique structure and word placement and imagery. Yeah my kind of thing. Blessingss ss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you!
Your comment is very much appreciated. I forgot about this piece. Actually happy to revisit especially with your thoughts underneath it. :) Blessings be with you too.
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