Locution

Echoes... Yes


Fathomed tests
Undermined
Over mind matters
 
Ship of fools
Held tools
Survival ruled
 
Poor timing
 
Ghosts wrote
On peeled
Orange pages
Drenched 
In salted water
 
Black ink drooled
 
A thief heard 
Diluted
Muted tones
Compute
 
Archetypes
Larger than
Pied eye
Visions
 
 
 
 
 
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Sandcastles in the air have

Sandcastles in the air have no foundations black ink drools bleeding on orange peeled paper sunken ship of fool’s drowned by their own tears and illusions of grandeur. I like the unique structure and word placement and imagery. Yeah my kind of thing. Blessingss ss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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Thank you!

Your comment is very much appreciated. I forgot about this piece. Actually happy to revisit especially with your thoughts underneath it. :) Blessings be with you too. 


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