TIME TO REST SAILOR

Dear,

As exhausted ships seek a shelter in a port

For a rest

I, finally. Wish to rest my head
on a thoughtful woman chest

Shedding thoughts, fears and tears
before, I drop asleep.
Here,

There are loads of naked chests
But not the type
that like to be cleansed by clean tears
Here,

There are roads leading to roads
along them,
If you stroll as I strolled

You would feel divided
your head would be crowded

with feelings

you would wish
they soon vanish ….
get buried in the basement of subconscious

as you bury your head beneath a pillow
trying to enjoy a break
to get up tomorrow

(the future yesterday)
feeling yesternight suppressed feelings

dancing all over the floors of your mind
then, in a search for equilibrium,
you compensate yourself
with a strong cup of coffee
a cigarette
but you get dominated by a sudden tempting thought

that , like a crazy ox,

makes you run in the roads again

recycling same old patterns
Insisting to engrave your point in the forehead of time
Insisting , to you,  life must finally submit

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the original version of this piece has been written in Istanbul, Tuesday, 31 august 2010

But I rewrote it differently tonight.

Jan 14, 2011

2:30 pm
 

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

 I wouldn’t really shed my tears on a lady’s chest no matter how attractive that chest is. I’m not the type of man how makes women breasts wet. I am a gentleman, or at least this is how I see me  when facing a mirror.

 

You know amigos? After I rewrote this piece, I wanted to subject it to quality test, so I sent it to a nice lady that I discovered lately in the internet. After a while she sent me an e-mail saying: I don’t like it Fahad. I then asked her to point to the weaknesses in the poem. She answered: in the poem you say “you compensate yourself
with a strong cup of coffee
a cigarette

” and you know  I don't smoke and don’t like coffee so how can I compensate myself with caffeine and nicotine?

I then realized that what I wrote isn’t as bad as I thought :)

 

 

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