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"Bubblegum"
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childrens poems
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I took one stick of bubblegum
and place it in my mouth,
grum, grum, grum, grum.
Then I blew a bubble,
I had bubblegum stuck to my thumb.
I took second stick of bubblegum
and placed it in my mouth,
pop, pop, pop, pop.
before I knew it,
it was all on my top.
I took a third stick of bubblegum
and placed in my mouth.
snap, snap, snap, snap.
it fell out and landed on my lap.
I took a last stick of bubblegum
and placed it in my mouth.
This one wont be the case,
I blew another bubble and
it was all over my face.
I was all out of sticks of bubblegum,
except for on my lap, face, top and thumb.
the great adventure of gum, we never forget the first experience, remember bazooka Joe on the comics? single little squares of pink gum. oh yeah those were the days,when I was a kid we use to see how many of the hard as a rock squares we could stuff in the mush and then see how big a bubble we could blow w/o it going all over our face and in our hair, by the way peanutbutter takes it out of hair lol...so does ice...
aww, that's cute. Thank you for critiquing so much of my poetry, I write children's poems also. But I have one question, do you mean your lap or your lab?
I hope to see some new additions! :) Thanks again.
I love the picture you paint with this poem. I smiled thru the whole thing. Very Cute.
very cute piece. i remember the bazooka gum when i was a kid and trying to blow bubbles and getting it all over my face. really cute piece.