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"True Love Is Forever"
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love poems I want you,
to marrie you,
to be with you,
because
I love you.
Our hearts to be together
with a ring around it.
Locked and I through away
the key.
Nobody can take that love
we made with our souls,
mind and hearts.
Nobody, but nobody
can tear us apart.
Our love will never
have an ending,
it keeps going on and on
the way love should be.
Nothing, but nothing
can take that love away,
were stronger then strong,
hearts never lie,
and mind is always there.
Just remembering all the
love we gave to each other.
Souls keep on living towards
happiness, and true love
is forever.
marrie is marry
through away the key is threw away the key
Other than the typos jumping out at me,
I totally love this piece.
If you don't want me to comment on typos, please let me know for future reference...just wanna help you make a great poem even better. I look forward to reading more of your work. You are very talented...I hope to see more comments on mine from you because you are obviously truly talented and your comments would mean a lot to me... just so you know, I know I say wanna instead of want to and cuz instead of because, that is just a choice in my speech but these that jump out at me don't seem to be special spellings ya know? I mean you know? Thanks for sharing your poetry here and I am so glad you commented on a couple of mine cuz I always reciprocate and you have so many different categories here so I am trying to comment on one in each category for now...Pam
truly beautiful glad to see you are a romantic too!