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I Don't Need
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My poems I don't need an eagle's eye to see
The sadness hidden behind your smile
I don't need super ears to hear
The sobs between laughs
I don't need super vision
To see the tear of sadness mixed with the tears of joy
I don't need a woman's intuition
To know that you're hurt
I don't need to be your best friend
All I know is that you need a friend
And i want you to know
That i will be there for you
No matter what mood you're in
I will be there to help you up
When others push you down
I will be there
When you need a shoulder to cry on
I know you don't like to talk about your feelings
But know you can come to me
Whenever you need
But also remember that this shoulder
Needs a shoulder itself
Only nobody offers it one
So excuse me if I’m spiteful
In your time of need
But that might be my way
Of expelling bad feelings
That I’ve kept inside
All this time
So maybe you need
All those things
Listed before
To see that I’m hurt
And to help me
In MY time of need
You did good, with adding
You did good, with adding more to it. :) I like it alot . And Im a shoulder here for ya. I know how it is to need somebody, so ill be here if you need it.
-Elfy*
thx
thx i typed and was saving it to my computer and ideas just kept running through my head so i added them and i think its alot better than b4
Love and hate go hand in hand for eternity
Its a good poem :) I like it
Its a good poem :) I like it alot. Its sweet and your a good person, and friend. And im the same way, im the shoulder, and i help anybody that needs it,as long as they ask. :) Im here if you need anybody yourself, cause even the shoulder, needs one too!
-Elfy*
A friend in need......
this is a very inspiring poem, poetry is all about emotional content and you've shown you have it in abundence. Keep up the good work
this is not the end, this is not the begining of the end, this is merely the end of the begining.
Great poem
Great poem