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My Heart (The Motel)
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hidden feelings Inside my heart
you will see
People sleeping on the floor
Lying next to each other;
Holding hands
Yelling
And breaking
The windows.
The janitor;
His name is God;
Just fixed the leaky faucet.
People were complaining so much about it,
saying they were sick
Of seeing their faces wet
From my tears.
There is one guitar in the corner
It gets played once in a while,
the strings like
Getting touched.
If you look up
The ceiling is covered in spitballs,
paint chipping
and cutting into the light fixtures,
Which are nothing
but a few candles,
and maybe an oil lamp or two.
There is only one room
in this motel,
But it is so big
That everyone fits inside
pretty nicely.
I would just like to make this a note
To the new guest:
MAKE YOUR BED.
This was awesome!!! I loved it, it was so written with such creativity, and was very visual. My favorite lines were
The janitor;
His name is God;
Just fixed the leaky faucet.
People were complaining so much about it,
saying they were sick
Of seeing their faces wet
From my tears.
And
I would just like to make this a note
To the new guest:
MAKE YOUR BED.
That was classic!!! It just seems like your not afraid to open up your heart!
Keep writing!!!
LadyA